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The Monster

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Meet The Monster..

Jamee was exiled for murder. The rat had done the unthinkable. He had broaght outsiders to the island. Three of them. One was a rat like he, the other two a stoat and a canine. They had come on a boat from a far off land called Faulk.
Jamee had never been one to abandon his fellow creatures when one was in trouble. Fishing off the shores of Exotica, Jamee used one of the hidden tunnels to exit onto the beach. Thats when he saw the boat, it had smashes upon the rocks and the three creatures swam to shore, thristy, half starved and dripping wet. Jamee HAD to help them.

Unfortunitly Keagan was not pleased with Jamee's actions and closed all tunnels back into the entry of the center of the island. Jamee would never again be home.

In the center of the Island, all the Exoticans watched massive moniter screens as they assembled for a show of execution, Exotica style. The stands in the arena were packed and people placed there bets. Almost all bet on the monster. The giant screens lit up and Jamee and his three companion could be seen wondering through the jungle. Jamee was scared. His companions confuesd.

Keagn stood at a high podium and addressed the entire inhabitance of Exotica Islands. "Good afternoon ladies and gentilmen." The crowed cheered. "We have gatherd here under grave circumstances. Three of our own have broked the one sacred law of Exotica. They have murdered." The rat lied..The crowed booed the condemmed as their charismatic leader continued. "That is why he and his three conspirers must now face 'The Monster." The crowed cheers wildly. Keagan spreads his arms wide and declairs: "Let the SHOW begin!!" the crowed cheers louder.

Jamee and his three companions head far away as he can get them away from the center of the island. He is in near panic because he knows what will happen next.

"Ahoy Jamee." That was Derlets voice. "Why are we trekken through this sweltering jungle when we could be getting some eats? Didn't yer master Keagan say we had free roaming privlages? Whats the hurry?"

The canine, named Benny joined his friend. "Derlets right, he said we were free to go, so we go. But not at a breakneck pace you idiot."

The other two, the stoat and the rat agreed with the canine.

Jamee spun around and grabbed the speaker by the scruff of the neck and screamed into his face. "Your the idiot! We've been sentenced to death! DEATH if we stay in one spot! Keagan means to have us killed!!"

The stoat, who was slow. "But we been given weapons, and theirs no one else out here but-"

He is suddenly interrupted by a beautiful sound. Far off someone was singing in the sweetest of voices. smooth and perfect it floated on the breeze towards them.

"Like a deadened nerve which never calms down,
my body’s arching under this sputtering noise :
remains of wings mingled with bones
that wind divides and scatters, in secret."

Jamee screamed. "Its the monster! We gotta get moving!"

The other three looked at him in mixed confusion and amazement.

Derlets pointed his cutless in the direction of the voice.
"Oi rat! Thats no monster tis an Anglel."

Without a second backward glance Jamee was off into the woods leaveing the other three to puzzle over there friend.

"I say we go see who it is. Maybe yon purty maiden can help us outta this fix."

Needlack the stoat grinned wickedly, having wicked ideas for the fem with the beautiful voice. "Hehehe, good idea Benny. And iffen purty lil maiden don't comply with our wishes, we can persuade her with this sword."

The thee of them head closer to the voice which by now grows closer and closer. Its sound soothing and hypnotic in the warm summer air.

"Immured fluid beauty, in my gold casket of ruins, like a pearl, I fall asleep.
Between sky and earth your shadow’s dissolving deep down inside me."

Eager to get some action Needlack runs ahead of his companions so he is the first to spot the singer. The sight of her stops him in his tracks. He stares eyes and mouth go wide. Walking with softly swaying hips, enticing with every move, is THE MOST beautiful creature he had every thought possable. Not even in his wildest fantasies could he conjure up an image of such rare beauty.

She was tall with feline features and save for a glittering, red pair of dainty panties was stark naked. Her hair was black with irredecent rainbows and her fur splotched black and white. Her large deep brown eyes had the longest eyelashes Needlack had ever seen with there lids painted in shimmering shades of variouse color. On her head flowed a gold and silver crown with shimmering blades of diomonds variouse colored lights and rainbows reflected off her crown and...Hands?

Needlack could not take his eyes from her and he realized too late as she moved in closer why they called her a monster. It was the last thought that went through his head before it was sliced clean off its neck by her nearly 3 foot long, razor sharp hand blades.

"In this day-night slow death and agony..."

The monsters operatic voice echoed on as its cold but gorgeouse brown eyes glared hatred at the two remaining creatures.

Derlet screamed, but Benny ran back into the undergrowth. Raising his cutless he parried with the 3 foot blades of the beautiful beast slicing through air, his metal clanging against her head spikes or her awsome hand knives. She was quite quick and very affective. Sweeping the rats blade aside with one hand, she used her other to skewer him through and through. Rising up the impaled rat off the ground, she let the bleeding body slide down to her knuckles before throwing him against a tree.

Benny stood watching in disbeleif and horror some few yards away. So this was the monster. A beautiful death sent to bring upong them devistating destruction.

"You give yourself up to the secret of my lips, and discover an urn to my viscera. Long floating strings lost in black waters, sweeping away our memories."

Benny wanted to run, in fact, as the monster came closer he took backward steps. He got out his bow and arrow, a weapon which he picked before being sent into the forest by the rat called Keagan. He stopped and stretched back the bow string, aiming the arrow right at the things neck. Benny was good with a bow and arrow and let loose the shaft at the oncomming creature.

The monster defected it. Bowing her head she simaltaniously raised her hand in a swift waveing motion. The metals and diamonds shimmered rainbows in the air with each of her movement. Still she sang enticingly, still she came for him. Benny cursed his luck and notched another arrow to his bow. He sighted along his arrow at The Monster and took aim. Lingering too look too long at her perfect face which the sight of her had him transfixed. She came closer.

"Don't loook!!! Don't look at her face don't look at her or your dead!" It was Jamee. He had come back. With a mighty throw he threw a good sized rock at The Monster which clanged off her crown and caused it to stagger backwards into a tree. This gave Jamee enough time to grab the canines hand and pull him along at a breakneck pace through the trees.

Once a fair distance away Benny began conversing with Jamee betwean ragged breaths.

Benny :"I think I can talk to it."

Jamee in disbeleife: "What!?"

Benny looked at the rat eye for eye. "Where I come from a worrior like that is hard to come by. If we were to get her on our side then we could go far. Conquer places. Plus, rat, did you see how beutiful she is!? She- she-"

Benny grabbed the dog firmly by his ear. "Are you nuts! She just killed two of your friends and many more! She's a killer, a demon! A-a-MONSTER! YOU CAN'T TALK TO IT!!"

In the distance a creaking of wood could be heard fallowed by a lowed thump and a rustling of leaves. The sound came again and again closer each time. Looking up at the tree tops both the rat and the dog could see that the Monster was cutting down tree's causing them to fall to the earth. The Monster was pissed.

"Remorse is like this clear noise of the ink shunning me.
Half-moon eye, where to hide myself ?
I give myself up to the driving rain
while my teeth are squeezing you."

Benny: "Listen to that, she's singing again. See, any beast who has a voice that perfect can't be all bad."

Jamee was about to say something to this idiotic dog when he relized something...Benny had a crush on that horrable thing. It was a mistake that Jamee had seen others make before. A mistake that only lead to death.

Jamee only looked at him as if seeing him for the very first time. "You can't reason with it, it lives only to kill. You'll die a horrable, painful death."

Benny shook his head at the rat. "No! I have the gift of gab, I could persuade a toad into thinking he's a squirrel. Look, just let me try, I'm going to give you my bow and arrows and you trade me your sword."

Jamee did what he was told but didn't like it. "Your gonna get killed."

Benny walked towards the sound of falling timber and said. "No I'm not."

The Monster came into veiw. Its terrable beauty luminated in the gathering sunlight. Rainbows of varied colors danced around its head and hands as the knives moved and scicored about. Its black, shiny, long hair reflecting each rainbow hued beam as its colored lights danced about her. It sang:

"Remorse is like this dull noise of the hammer hitting you.
There, beauty takes form only at dead of night."

Benny smiled as he approached the tall feline with the 3 foot long blades on each finger.

"Look, I can see your a reasonable creature. Pretty too. But lonly am I right?"

It did not anwer it only sang in a beautifule, warm voice.

"The whitened soul is disadorned from charred over-shores.
Under the blister of stones, reluctantly, the wave vibrates : walled suns.The bitter mescal springs like a charm from your distended belly... black hole."

Benny was amazed and slightly intimidated by her good looks and sexy voice. Also slightly transfixed.

Jamee watched with dismay, expecting only the worst. He knew from years of living on the island that beauty and allure was one of the beast greatest traps.

Benny held out a hand pleadingliy. "Look. I can help you. Its unfair that they leave you out here on this island all by yerself. Come with me and you will be made a queen. I am a very powerful ruler from far off lands. I can get you all that you want or desire."

As he talked the monster slowly moved in closer backing the canine up against the tree.

"Benny began to get scared. "Stay back! I will slice you from head to tail if you get to near." He gulped.

The Monster cleaved the sword in two with a single swipe of her long knives and thrust as hard as she could her knife tips into the bark of the tree that the dog was now forced to back against.

"Thirsty earth for amber and glair, draft, chasms of glass, confined stars hidden work, gnawed bone." It sang.

Benny could see an up close veiw of The Monster, which now pressed its tall curvy body against his own. Feeling her warm breast against his chest, her hard naked nipples pressing into his shirt. He blubbered in fear as her face lowered and came within an inch of his. Benny was terrified.

the shorn cutless dropped from his right hand and he blubbed and wimpered. He could not take his eyes from her. GOD she was gorgeouse! Being so close to something so amazingly wonderful, he began to get aroused. He raised his chin, his amber eyes met her brown ones and he leaned slightly forwared to kiss her. 'Maybe this is what she wants' He thinks to himself, unable to resist her.

She lowers her face towards his, leaning in close as her full , rose-petal-like lips part as she moves in for the kill. Her razor sharp teeth rip into his throat, only to pull his juggular out. The canine is left choking on his own blood. The Monster chews her food. Drinking and eating down her fresh kill.

Jamee screams!

The Monster turns to look at him. Her next victem is sighted.

listen to her sing..If you DARE... --> www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKX1Ur…
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